西安高新雅思口語(yǔ)5.5分part3回答舉例 

概述:西安高新雅思口語(yǔ)5.5分,西安高新雅思口語(yǔ)6.5分班,雅思口語(yǔ)Part3的常見(jiàn)題型是“Why”,甚至有些考生在Part1就會(huì)被考官問(wèn)蒙,很多考生覺(jué)得考官是在故意刁難。
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西安高新雅思口語(yǔ)5.5分,西安高新雅思口語(yǔ)6.5分班,雅思口語(yǔ)Part3的常見(jiàn)題型是“Why”,甚至有些考生在Part1就會(huì)被考官問(wèn)蒙,很多考生覺(jué)得考官是在故意刁難。

其實(shí),考官是在幫你。

TA只是想看看你在“表達(dá)詳盡”“詞匯豐富”“語(yǔ)法多樣”等方面還有什么“好貨”沒(méi)show給TA,好給你在各項(xiàng)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)上再撩個(gè)0.5之類(lèi)。

被why卡住的考生,要么是準(zhǔn)備不充分,沒(méi)有刷過(guò)題庫(kù),缺乏相關(guān)知識(shí)儲(chǔ)備,倒是上一題沒(méi)回答詳盡,要么是思路受限,難以展示出自然的對(duì)話能力。

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1.Why do you think some people prefer not to tell others about their achievements?

I imagine that people have different reasons for keeping their achievements to themselves. One reason could be that some people don't like to show off or draw attention to themselves. Other people perhaps don't value their own accomplishments because they are constantly aiming at even bigger goals. Finally, I suppose that many of us are so busy that we don't stop to savour the moment; maybe we need to slow down and enjoy our successes.

我覺(jué)得人們不公開(kāi)自己的成就有不同的原因。一個(gè)是一些人不喜歡顯擺或吸引注意力。其他人不覺(jué)得自己的成就有多厲害,因?yàn)樗麄兛偸怯懈蟮哪繕?biāo)。最后,我覺(jué)得很多人可能太忙了以至于沒(méi)空品味那個(gè)時(shí)刻,可能我們需要慢下來(lái)去享受自己的成功。

解析:第一句是套句,最好在需要思考原因的時(shí)候先說(shuō)出來(lái),用于給自己爭(zhēng)取思考時(shí)間,如果一下子就能想到原因,還是直接說(shuō)即可;卮鸾Y(jié)構(gòu)是總分,前兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)是他人的原因,最后小結(jié)給出自己的觀點(diǎn)并給出推測(cè)性回答(maybe)。第一個(gè)原因背后的邏輯鏈條是“為什么不公開(kāi)?——公開(kāi)了會(huì)得到關(guān)注——有些人不想得到關(guān)注(個(gè)人意愿)”,第二個(gè)原因背后的邏輯鏈條是“為什么不公開(kāi)?——沒(méi)什么好公開(kāi)的(否定回答)”。詞匯方面,題目中有prefer not to的否定表達(dá),回答里也使用了don't like to , don't value, don't stop to 等對(duì)應(yīng)表達(dá),題中的achievements在回答中被替換成了accomplishments, bigger goals(近義),successes等。語(yǔ)法方面,使用了情態(tài)動(dòng)詞、進(jìn)行時(shí)、so...that句式、比較級(jí)等。

2.Could you suggest some reasons why some people are deciding to reduce their use of technology?

Yes,I think the main reasons are that people feel overwhelmed or that their use of technology is becoming unhealthy. Some people have realised that all the devices and applications that they use are making their lives more complicated and stressful than necessary. Others might see themselves becoming addicted to checking their phones, or wasting too much time on their social media pages. I try to limit my own use of my phone and laptop because I want to spend more of my time in the 'real world' than on the Internet.

是的,我覺(jué)得主要原因是人們覺(jué)得不堪重負(fù)或不健康。一些人已經(jīng)意識(shí)到他們用的各種的設(shè)備和應(yīng)用正在讓他們的生活變得不必要的復(fù)雜和有壓力。其他人可能發(fā)覺(jué)自己越來(lái)越對(duì)手機(jī)上癮,或者花太多時(shí)間在社交媒體頁(yè)面。我試圖限制自己用手機(jī)和電腦因?yàn)槲蚁牖ǜ鄷r(shí)間在真實(shí)世界而不是網(wǎng)絡(luò)。

解析:如果一下子就能想到原因,就直接說(shuō),像這個(gè)回答的第一句那樣;卮鸾Y(jié)構(gòu)是總分總,前兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)是他人的可能看法,最后小結(jié)給出自己的理由。第一種觀點(diǎn)相對(duì)抽象一點(diǎn),第二個(gè)觀點(diǎn)比較具體,但其實(shí)都是很容易想到的觀點(diǎn)。個(gè)人理由的思路是“我不想做這個(gè)因?yàn)槲蚁胱瞿莻(gè)”。詞匯方面,題目中有technology,回答用devices, applications, phones, social media pages, laptop等進(jìn)行了拓展,語(yǔ)法方面,使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、進(jìn)行時(shí)、比較級(jí)、情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等。

3. Why do you think employees sometimes don't provide good customer service?

When employees’treatment of customers isn’t good, I think it’s usually because they are unhappy doing their jobs. This might be because they are treated badly by their managers, or because they haven’t been encouraged to take pride in their work. I remember in my first ever job, for example, I didn't like the work that I was given, and so I probably wasn’t as thoughtful or attentive as I should have been when I had to speak to customers.

當(dāng)雇員對(duì)客戶(hù)不好的時(shí)候,我想通常是因?yàn)樗麄儾幌矚g自己的工作。這可能是因?yàn)樗麄兊睦习鍖?duì)他們不好,或者他們沒(méi)有被鼓勵(lì)去為自己的工作感到驕傲。我記得我的第一份工作,我不喜歡被分配的任務(wù),所以當(dāng)我需要面對(duì)客戶(hù)的時(shí)候我很可能沒(méi)做到應(yīng)該做到的體諒和專(zhuān)注。

解析:這個(gè)回答的結(jié)構(gòu)是“應(yīng)題—解釋—舉例”。第一句用狀語(yǔ)從句開(kāi)頭,轉(zhuǎn)述了題目,展示了話題相關(guān)詞匯,給自己爭(zhēng)取了思考時(shí)間。第二句從“個(gè)人感受”角度出發(fā)進(jìn)行原因推測(cè),不好好工作是因?yàn)椴婚_(kāi)心(多么日常又普遍的理由)。第三句繼續(xù)解釋為什么不開(kāi)心,也是很容易想到的原因,難點(diǎn)在于你可能不會(huì)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)“老板對(duì)我不好”和“我對(duì)工作愛(ài)不起來(lái)”。第四句用自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)舉例,展示了話題相關(guān)詞匯。語(yǔ)法方面使用了各種從句、情態(tài)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)等。

4. Why do some people like to live near rivers, lakes or the sea?

Well,the view is probably a major factor; most people like to look out to sea, or across a river or lake. I'd much prefer to look out of my window onto a natural landscape than an apartment building in a city. Then there's the lifestyle: if you live by the sea, for example, you can lie on the beach, go for a swim, or do water sports like surfing or waterskiing. I definitely wouldn't mind living near a beach at some point in my life!

景色很可能是主要原因,多數(shù)人喜歡看海,或河,或湖。我更喜歡從窗子看出去是自然風(fēng)景而不是城市里的公寓樓。然后是生活方式,如果你住在海邊,比如,就可以躺在沙灘上,去游泳,或做水上運(yùn)動(dòng)像沖浪或滑水。我絕對(duì)不介意住在有沙灘的地方!

解析:這個(gè)回答的結(jié)構(gòu)是“原因1-個(gè)人愛(ài)好-原因2-解釋-舉例-個(gè)人想法”。第一句相對(duì)來(lái)說(shuō)是中國(guó)考生不常用的表達(dá),多數(shù)人習(xí)慣說(shuō)“原因是A”而不是“A是原因”,從現(xiàn)在起可以在練習(xí)回答這類(lèi)題目的時(shí)候使用新的句式。從內(nèi)容看,“風(fēng)景”和“生活方式”是與話題相關(guān)的、很自然可以想到的原因。這個(gè)回答最值得學(xué)習(xí)的是對(duì)話題內(nèi)容的拓展,包括看風(fēng)景、看什么風(fēng)景,做一些活動(dòng),什么活動(dòng),既豐富了回答又展示了詞匯。

5. Why do you think men tend to show their emotions less than women?

Maybe it’s because of the way we are brought up. I think that boys are often taught from an early age not to cry. Also, boys are aware that their friends might see it as a sign of weakness if they show their feelings. Perhaps girls are brought up to be more sensitive to their friends' feelings.

可能這是因?yàn)槲覀兊慕甜B(yǎng)方式。我覺(jué)得通常男孩從小被教不要哭。而且,他們覺(jué)得如果表達(dá)自己的感覺(jué),他們的朋友會(huì)認(rèn)為哭是弱的標(biāo)志;蛟S女孩的教養(yǎng)方式使她們可以對(duì)朋友的感覺(jué)更敏感。

解析:不確定語(yǔ)氣的使用,是雅思口語(yǔ)回答的“加分項(xiàng)”,因?yàn)楦匀、合理。這個(gè)回答的開(kāi)始給出了可能的原因,然后根據(jù)題目?jī)?nèi)容,從男孩和女孩兩個(gè)方面分別進(jìn)行了解釋。注意詞匯替換: show their emotions=show their feelings,less=more sensitive。語(yǔ)法方面使用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、if句、比較級(jí)等。


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